雅思写作考情分析-亚太区写作
【小作文】柱状图
2年份5国家小麦生产;属于动态图类别,可以参照剑桥真题范文关于五个国家在香蕉和咖啡费用上的图形。重点注意做到横向比较和纵向比较,横向为上升下降的描述,纵向为大小关系比较。
【大作文】
The cost of public transport is rising rapidly. Why might this be the case? What can be done to solve this problem?
【话题分析】报告类作文,提问方式相对简单,直接回答有对应的原因和解决方案即可。对于题目中公共交通的花费急剧增加这样的话题,可以从政府的角度思考,毕竟我们研究的对象是公共交通,进一步分析花费增加的原因可以思考花费在哪里了,比如都花在建造这些公共交通上,那为什么需要建造?原因就可以联想到城市扩张,现有的基础建设不够;其他的原因也可以从反面思考,花费增加,那是因为收益不足,收益不足的背后原因是什么?我们可以想想今天很多交通价格管制,导致入不敷出,或者是私家车太多,导致用户减少,这两个结果都是需要政府采取补贴,加大了公共交通的花费,所以可以写的原因很多,可以从不同角度思考这些原因,再给相应的解决方案即可。
参考范文
Undoubtedly, people are now enjoying one of the greatest technological boom times in human history. One achievement is that more means of transportation are available nowadays, but it also requires more cash devoted into the public transport. I think that city expansion and private cars should be responsible for this. One reason for this trend is associated with the growth in the size of cities. As a large number of people are drawn to cities either in search of more employment opportunities or seeking superior health care, this definitely will pose tremendous pressure on governments to deal with the frustrating traffic congestion. One of the measures to help citizens spend less time commuting is to provide more public transport services, such as buses, subways and trains, meaning that more financial support are needed. Besides, the popularity of automobiles, more efficient and comfortable, also discourages people’s enthusiasm for travel by public transport. As the number of potential passengers reduces, the companies running public transport will find it more difficult to keep a balance of payments. In this way, the government have to subsidize public transport, ensuring that the existing system can operate normally and avoid affecting people's travel. The spending on public transport is still increasing and measures should be taken to solve this problem. By increasing taxes on gasoline, the users of private cars will reconsider the extensive and efficent public transport system, which will create more revenue for the operating enterprises and more taxes to the government. Also, for the government, private companies should be allowed to build the traffic network and, as marketization management can drive overall operational efficiencies.
With the political will, such measures could really reduce the amount of money paid into public transport, considering city expansion and the popularity of private cars.
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