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当文章题目以Discuss both sides and give your own opinion,的形式提问时,要求考生在作文中展现折中式讨论。在此类文章中一,三考生需要对题干中提到的问题进行两方面论述和扩充,并对双方之间的关系进行比较和分析。考生最终的观点可以适当倾向某一方,注意在论述过程中结构和观点的一致性。先看下面这道例题:

Some people argtle tfzat govermnents sftould give Jinancial support to art projects such as theatres and museums, while others suggest that the money should  be spent on htealth care and education. Discuss both sides and give yo ur own opinion.(2012.05.26)
按照之前所学习的任务反应(TR)的审题标准来剖析这道真题,可以得到以下信息:
核心词:government; financial support; money should be spent on
对立观点: art projects ; health care and education
原因: art projects (spiritual needs / cultural legacy) health care and edilcation (basic needs / civil rights for living

这个题目的重点在于提问方式,Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.包含了两部分内容,分别为discuss both sides和give your own opinion。其中的give yo1l"鲫opinion是要求考生表明态度,而discuss both side翃0要求考生对问题双方进行全面地论证和对比,而不是简单地罗列和称述。

雅思写作如何判定正反面观点类作文

试看如下的提纲有什么问题

l) Introduction governmental spending art or basic facilities; mofe basic facilities

2) Reason basic need for all citizens

3) Reason stablise social order for the authorities

4) Reason ensure the basic civil rights ofhuman beings; govenunental obligation

5) Conclusion more basic facilities are more important

可以看出上述提纲忽略了对art的论述,无论是必要性还是非必要性,都只字未提。显然,这难以支撑整个文章的结构。如果题目要求的两个方面没有得到充分论述,会丢失TR部分的一定分数,最终影响总成绩。

试看如下优化后的提纲:

1) Introduction governmental spending art or basic facilities; more basic facilities

2) Education and health stabilise the social order ensure the basic civil rights

3) Art : spiritual need for people in their leisure time

4) Conclusion more basic facilities are more important; cannot give up art

根据优化后的提纲,文章在第二段论证了基础设施的重要意义,在第三段提到了艺术的重要性,并且可以与之前的内容进行相应的对比,最终得出结论基础设施更为重要,但是基础设施的建设不能以牺牲艺术为代价。

尝试列出如下题目的提纲:

1:Some people think that robots are very I 呷 ortant to humanb future development,while others think they are dangerous and have'nega tive eflects on society.Discuss botlz views and give yottr opinion.

(2011.01.08)

1) Introduction_________________________.

2)Reason(one  side):__________________________.

3)Reason(the other side):________________________.

4) Conclusion:____________________________________________.

2:Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other  countries, while other people  · think thitt it is not neces sary to travel abroad· because all the information-can be seen on TV ahd the Internet Discuss bothviews and give your opihion

1) Introduction:________________________________________.

2) Reason (one side) :____________________________________.

3) Reason (the other side):____________________________________.

4) Conclusion___________________________________________.

3:Some people think that the government of their counhy shortld support creative artists nancially, while others believe that they should lind Jinancial supportfrom other sources instea & Discuss both viaps and give yo ur opinion.

(2011. 02. 1 7)

1) Introduction:_________________________________.

2)Reason(one side):__________________________________.

3)Reason(the other side):__________________________________.

4)Conclusion:_____________________________________________________.


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