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在雅思写作的议论文中,一般 提议遵照introduction-body-conclusion(前言段-行为主体段-依据段)的“三步曲”。Body(主体)语段出示了论述见解的原因,是全部稿子的行为主体,在得分中占据挺大的比例。

比如9分雅思作文得分就规定:

presents a fully developed position in answer to the question with relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas

当你问,什么是fully extended / well supported?就是说丰富的主体段。

雅思写作如何写出高分好的作文

即便是5分作文,也规定:

is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details

即一样要主体语段丰富才行。

通常情况下,要雅思作文写的好,最少必须带有2个行为主体段,且每一行为主体段都务必有着确立的主题风格句即topic sentence,并有多个句supporting sentences,也就是说人们常说的事实论据与论点论据。提议在训练议论文写作时遵照好多个简易的标准,就可以快速进行原因段,而且搭建连贯性和原因充足的议论文哦! 1.Write a topic sentence for each paragraph you plan to write. Each topic sentence should relate to your thesis statement and introduce what the paragraph will be about. If you find that the topics you want to discuss do not support the thesis statement you have written, revise your thesis statement or reconsider your topic sentences.

简单来讲,就是说每每段,必!须!有着1个确立的主题风格句,全部事实论据都紧紧围绕这几句进行,防止段儿偏题。

2.Write ideas that support your topic sentences. The topic sentence for each paragraph tells the reader what the paragraph will be about. The ideas stated in the rest of the paragraph should all relate to the topic sentence.

适用句务必紧紧围绕主题风格句进行,考生们必须要留意这一点儿,假如偏题,那麼就会出現比较比较严重的罚分,那可真是哭都赶不及啦!

上例子:

例子看这里

Hobbies are important for many reasons. First, a hobby can be educational. For example, if the hobby is stamp collecting, the person can learn about the countries of the world and even some of their history. Second, engaging in a hobby can lead to meeting other people with the same interests. A person can also meet other people by going to the school. Third, a person's free time is being used in a positive way. The person has no time to be bored or get into mischief while engaged in the hobby. Finally, some hobbies can lead to a future job. A person who enjoys a hobby-related job is more satisfied with life.

后面紧跟的First,second, third都是为了支持前面的第一句话。此外,在每一个点,又加入新的支持。比如在First句后面,又加了For example,来支持前面的观点,这样层层递进,文章就看起来格外的脉络清晰。这句中,很明显主题句就是Hobbies are important for many reasons.

但本段也并非完美无瑕哦~ A person can also meet other people by going the school与hobby重要的原因没有关系,因此削弱了整个段落的连贯性与统一性,应该被去掉。


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