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雅思写作双边讨论类作文结尾段怎么写?

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摘要:雅思写作双边讨论类作文结尾段怎么写?

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结尾段的主要内容是重申个人观点。该段主要包括三个部分:总结;重申观点;建议/预测等。其中第一部分和第三部分可以选写。

(1)结尾段的内容框架

结尾段第一句总结(可有可无)

第二句重申个人观点

第三句建议/预测(可有可无)

(2)结尾段可以用到的信号词和句型

结尾段可以选用的信号词

· In conclusion / To conclude / To sum up,...

· In a nutshell....

· FA) m what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that

2)结尾段重申观点可选用的句型

· ( 让步 ) Although / Despite (the fact that)...

·(单边)直接给出观点。如果开头段已经陈述过此观点,此时应注意同义替换。

3)结尾段建议/预测可以选用的句型

· I suggest that... / It is suggested that... / My suggestion is that... (somebody should dosomethingj

· There is no / little / reasonable chance that... (something will happen)

· It is possible / likely / impossible / unlikely that... (something will happen)

雅思写作双边讨论类作文结尾段怎么写?

(3)结尾段例文展示

例题

Some people believe museums arefor education of the youth. However,others believe that it

should provide something interesting and entertaining in those public place.Discuss both viaws and give your own opinion. [006. 08. 05]

From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that museums have botheducational and entertaining functions in modern society. The combination of education andentertainment can bring more profits to museums and it's beneficial to visitors.

例文展示

例题1

Some people believe that the charity organisations should give aid to those in greatest

need, wherever they live. Some people believe that the charity organisations would better

concentrate on helping people who live in their own country instead. Discuss both views and

give your opinion. 【2010.01.09】

写作结构分析

开头段引人话题——社会慈善受到越来越多的关注。

主体段1甲方观点——慈善应该由本国人受益的理由同胞关系;资源有限。

主体段2乙方观点——慈善应该面向全世界的理由做慈善其实很简单跨国慈善有助于全世界的发展。

结尾段个人观点,即虽然资源有限,但是慈善应当面向全世界所有需要的人。

Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to social charity. [ 引人话题 ] For the whole

world, it's good to see this phenomenon as it can help more people to get a better life. [ 转述原题

观 点-1 But when it comes to practice, some questions become obvious, and one of them is the

difiEerence between different countries. We can't ignore that more people living in poverty are in the

third world cotultries, while their countries may not have the power to save them. [ 转述原题观点二 ]

It's easy to understand why some people prefer

观 点 1 Firstlx as an individual person, one should make oneself good enough, ana tilen it wuu1u uc

the time for him or her to help the others. So should the country. A country should firstly make sure

their own people live easily. [ 分论 点 1+ 论据 1 ] Secondly, as we all know, the resources are limited,

and it is hard to satisfy all the people in need in the world. Therefore, many people would think thatthe interest of their own people should be given priority to. [ 分论 点 2+ 论据 2 ]

But for the other people, the whole world is a family, so we should be united and help each other.

[ 乙方观 点 ] Doing charity is very easy sometimes. [ 分论点 1 ] Three dollars in the United States

just mean a cup of Stafbucks coffee, while it can be all the living expenses of a child for one day

in an underdeveloped country. [ 论据 1 ] Transnational charity plays an active role in the world's

development. [ 分论点 2 ] The organisation s or people who do charity throughout the world are good

examples. They will encourage more people to take action. [ 论据 2 ]

As far as I see, it would be better to set up global charities which raise money from whoever wouldlike to help people in the most need without distinguishing them by their nationalities. These charitieswould not be influenced by counMes, and they just concentrate on the greatest need. [ 个人观 点 ]


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