雅思写作常见连贯与衔接错误句子之间或段落之间没有合理的连接词

广州雅思培训小编要分享的是雅思写作备考类：雅思写作常见连贯与衔接错误句子之间或段落之间没有合理的连接词

句子之间或段落之间没有合理的连接词

在写作过程中，由于受传统中文写作方法的影响，一部分考生的作文连接词使用不明显基至没有连接词，导致文章的逻辑性不强。这种情况主要集中为以下几种

1)首段连接词缺失/错误

2)主体段连接词缺失/错误

3)结尾段连接词缺失

我们以下面的真题为例逐一进行讲解。

例题

Now many people are using mobile / cell phones and computers to connect with each other.

Therefore, some people think that hunta. n behtgs are losing ability to contntunicate with each other

face tofacc To what extent doyou agree or disagree with the above statentent? [2014.10.11]

(1)首段连接词缺失/错误

学生思路一

with the development of communication technology, smart phones and computers have become

necessary devices for individuals who want to live in a modefn society. Some people think the faceto_face communication skills are losing. I totally agree with this opinion.

学生思路二

with the development of communication technology, smart phones and computers have becotne

necessary devices · for individuals who want to live in a modem society. Therefore, some people think

the face-to-face communication skills are losing. I totally agree with this opinion.

老师修改版

with the development of communication technology, smart phones and computers have become

necessary devices for individuals who want to live in a modem society. Howw some people thinlcthe face-to-face communication skills are losing. I totally agree with this opinion.

(2)主体段连接词缺失/错误

学生思路

people who get used to using a computer or mobile phones tend to type words more than talking. Asis lmown to all, forced by the fast tempo of modem society, young people have to contact with eachother in a quicker and less disturbing way. For example....

On the other hand, communication is a skill that can only be improved by constantly practising. Inother words, mobile phones or computers cannot provide a chance for users to talk more but to bequiet in Eont of the screens...

注意这两段之间的逻辑关系错误，这两段并不是对立，而是并列中的递进关系。

老师修改版

me main reason is that people who get used to using a computer or mobile phone tend to type wordsmore than talking. As is known to all, forced by the fast tempo of modem sociew, young people haveto contact with each other in a quicker and less disturbing way. For example....

Additioglly communication is a skill that can only be improved by constantly prctising. In otbetkont of the screens...

words, mobile phones or computers cannot provide a chance for users to talk more but to be quiet in

(3)结尾段连接词缺失

学生思路

I do share the view that people's communication skills are degrading as a result of the wide application of mobile phones and computers.

老师修改版

To-conclude, I do share the view that people's communication skills are degrading as a result of the wide application of mobile phones and computers.