剑14雅思写作TASK2真题解析

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教师点评

首先，从话题类型来看，本题属于。抽象类。话题。其次，本题的提问方式为箔双边讨论。，是在考试中非常常见的提问方式之一。也正因如此，本题在论述阶段不仅要顾及题干中的两方观点，而且应该清晰地突出笔者自身的立场。再次，本题题干中的"best。一词也是审题的重点之一，不容忽视。最后，题目中存在两个明显的例子an unsatisfactor job和sho饩awf田on y，在论述过程中应尽可能地将其用在文章里，但不做强制要求。

高分范文

Almost everyone wants to pursue a life path strewn with roses, whereas the truth is that the real life isalways full of twists and turns. This, accordingly, provokes the endless debate on how to face difficulties ofour lives.

Some shiftless people choose to adapt themselves to the tough situations of their lives rather than struggle,naivety believing that misfortunes might somehow disappear or they are able to successfully adjust themselvesto difficulties that others are trying their best to go tluough. Once they get ajob without any satisfaction, forexample, they do have the illusion that one day they can suddenly become extremely passionateabout thejob and all the dissatisfaction they used to have will be totally gone. Obviously, they ought to walk out of thefairy tale world they mistakenly believe they are living in but actually dos not exist at all.

On the other hand, people with a positive outlook on life are more likely to actively forge ahead with thehardship they are facing. In most cases, they make every eflort to overcome the baiTier between real life andthe life they dream of. In a financial predicament, for instance, they unquestionably exert themselves to the

utmost to boy°w money from their Eiends, apply for loan Eom banks, or work unbelievably hard to makeenough money. Beyond all doubt, they will remove their obstacles step by step. On top of this, what they canlearn and accumulate *om this process can be definitely seen as the priceless life experiences.

In conclusion, we should certainly be the masters of our own destiny but not give up ourselves or be defeatedby any difficulty of life.

参考译文

几乎每个人都想要追求安逸的生活，然而事实是真实的人生总是充满了各种挫折。这也就引起了一场永无止境的讨论我们应该如何面对生活中的艰难困苦。

不求上进的人选择去适应这些生活中的困境而不是为之奋斗。他们天真地认为这些不幸可能会莫名地消失，或者认为他们最终可以成功地调整自己来适应这些别人需要竭尽全力才能克服的困难。例如，虽然他们非常不满意自己的工作，但他们仍然心存幻想，某一天他们可以突然变得对这个工

作充满激情、那时对工本所有的不满都将烟消云散，显然他们应该走出那个自以为生活在其中却根本不存在的童话世界。

另一方面，拥有积极人生观的人们更愿意在他们面临困境时砥砺前行。在大多数情况下，他们会尽其所能去克服横亘于现实和他们梦想生活之间的障碍。例如，一旦处于财务危机中，毋庸置疑，他们会使出浑身解数去向友人借钱，向银行申请贷款，或极其努力地工作以赚取足够的钱。毫无疑司，他们会一步步地摆脱困境。除此之外，在这个过程中他们所学习和积累的东西绝对可以被视为宝贵的人生经验。

总之，我们当然应该成为主宰自己命运的主人，而不是自我放弃或者被生活的困境所击败。

结构分析与点评

由于题目是材双边讨论"类题目，因此本文采用较为常见的四段式结构。开头段介绍背景并点明题目。主一段和主二段分别就题干中的两个观点展开论述，并且通过分析这两个观点，笔者的倾向性也一目了然地表现了出来。结尾段通过主段的论述自然而然地得出结论，即笔者自身的立场，回应题干主体。