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(1)结尾段的内容框架

观点类作文的结尾段包括三个部分国对前文内容的总结圆重申个人观点;圆提出建议或预测未来的发展趋势。其中国国部分可有可无。

We have three important parts of education reading, writing and math. Some people think every child will benefit from a fourth skill added to the list computer skill Do you agree or disagree? [2012. 11. 08]

In summary, the skill of operating computers is important in modem society. It should be given the same

significance as reading, writing and Lnath. [ 总结前文 ] OVerall I personally reach the conclusion that computer skill should not be added into the current school disciplines. [ 重 申 个人观 点 ]

注意段落中的下画线部分即为结尾段专用句型。

雅思写作观点类作文结尾段怎么写?

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例题1:

The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to  decrease the violent crimes in society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?[2011.05.19]

作结构分拆

开头段:个人观点是政府应该控制电影和电视上暴力场景的数量。

让步段:暴力场景也有其积极的一面,例如:具有教育意义增强电影或电视的艺术效果。

主体段:但是,我认为还是应该控制暴力场景的数量,理由是毒害年轻人;导致青少年犯罪率上升;使人们更加暴力、冷血。

结尾段:重申个人观点,,即政府应该控制电影和电视上暴力场景的数量。

Recently, the discussion about whether the government should control the amount of violence in filmsand on television has become a heated one. [ 交代背景 ] people take diverse attitudes towards thisissue,【转述原题观点】I believe the amount of violence should be constrained.【阐述个人观点】

Admittedly violent scenes have their positive sides, which should not be controlled by governmeont.· [ 主题句 ] To begin with, there are many valuable educational functions in this kind of films and Tv programmes. [ 分论点 1 ] When we see these scenes, we should tell young people or children such

behaviours are wrong. [ 论据 1 ] Secondly, violent scenes can enhance the artistic effect of the films.[ 分论点 2 ] For example, in the films of the director John woo, there is aestheticisation of violence.Sometimes, the beauty ofmany scenes is shown through violence. [ 论据 2 ]

However, it is undeniable that there at'e many good reasons for controlling the amount of violence infilms and on television. [ 主题句 ] First, a large amount of violence in films and on television can doharm to young people. [ 分论点 1 ] Because they contain numerous of erotic, corrupt and provokingepisodes, which can bring negative influence to naive young people. [ 论据 1 ] Moreover, sinceyoung people are in the forma6ve yeai'", they are not mature enough. [ 分论 点 2 ] They always likeimitating their idols, no matter right or wrong, which leads to the increase ofjuvenile delinquents. [ 论据 2 1 Thirdly, violence begets violence. [ 分论点 3 ] A large number of violent scenes in films andon television can make people aggressive and cold-blooded, which would enhance the violent crimesin society. [ 论据 3 ]

As far as I am concerned, I strongly believe that the amount of violence in films and on TV should be

controlled. [ 重申个人观 点 ] At the same time, we cannot deny the advantages brought by it. Andthe best policy is to develop the merits of the violent films and television programmes, while gradingand filtering them, describing which are not fit for children to watch. [ 建议 ]



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