广州雅思培训小编要分享的是雅思写作备考类: 雅思写作连贯与衔接必备技能合理使用代词
在雅思写作大作文中可以使用代词指代前一句中的主语或宾语,这样可以有效地避免重复。请看下面这个示例
例题:
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? what other measures do you think might be effec-tive? [2014. 01. 09]
There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities
and on motorways everywhere. solving these problems, (指代前-句 中 的 traffic and pollutionproblems) is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.
While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and
Pollution, higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for long. As this policy would
also aflect the cost of public transport, it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to
travel on the roads. But there are other implemental measures that would have a huge effect on theseproblems,(指代第一段的traffic and pollution problems)
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请尝试找出下列句子中使用错误的代词并改正。
a. Studying in co-educational school, a girl may concentrate more on popular boys, which may causeignorance ofhis study.
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b. Some graduates are proud of their diplomas, however, companies regard they as nothing.
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c. parents have to prevent teenagers from committing crime, because they should be responsible fortheir misbehaviours.
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