对于任务的回应
1.涵盖题目要求
2.文章立场清晰
3.提出、引申、并支持主要观点,但可能有过度概括,分支观点不够紧凑连贯与衔接
1.信息和观点组织有逻辑性;文章从头至尾有延续性
2.衔接手段使用合理,虽然可能有一些使用过少或过多
3.每个段落都有明确的主题
词汇资源
1.词汇使用丰富、有一定的准确性和灵活性
2.能使用较不常见词汇,对语体和搭配有所了解
3.在词汇的选择、拼写和构词法上偶尔有错误
4.语法结构的范围和准确性
5.使用多种复杂结构
6.多数语句无误
7.语法和标点掌握较好,但可能会犯一些错误。
然后接下来再看以下同一个句子三种表达为例大家琢磨琢磨吧:
1. Interestingly, the newer metro systems are much shorter than the older ones.
2. It is interesting to note that the more recently established metro systems are far shorter than the older ones .
3. One interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that the more recently established systems are considerably shorter than the older ones.
再来三句:
1. It is also important to note that more girls go to high school in all parts of the world except East Asia.
2. It is also worth noting that females are more likely to attend second school in all regions except East Asia.
3. Also noteworthy is the fact that females are more likely to receive a secondary education in all regions except East Asia.
以上是雅思写作:5分和7分表达上有啥不同?区别在于?。通过上面的例子,大家就可以看到,在句式的表达上,雅思写作5分和7分之间不仅仅是词汇的区别,更有语法和结构上的不同。所以大家在备考雅思写作的时候向着7分努力吧。
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