按照某位高人的说法,好的雅思大作文必然是一个汉堡状的(请脑补一个汉堡王),意思是前后是头尾轻简,中部重繁。但凡看到导入段和结尾段臭长臭长的,大家就可以默认它的band分是在7分靠下了。小编将要分享一下:雅思写作满分范文
The table below gives information on consumer spending on different itemsin five different countries in 2002.
Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category - 2002
构思过程:
I know that I can write a short introduction by paraphrasing thequestion.
I look for an overall trend. I can see that the food/drinks/tobaccocategory has the highest percentages, and leisure/education has the lowest. Now I want to write two main body paragraphs. I need to select something tosay about each country. Remember, there is no rule about what information youselect; everyone will do this differently. I look for the highest figures in each category: I can see that Turkey hasthe highest figure for food/drinks/tobacco AND for education/leisure. Italy hasthe highest figure for clothing/footwear.
So, I'll write a paragraph about Turkey and Italy.
My final paragraph needs to talk about Ireland, Spain and Sweden. Maybe I'll point out that Ireland has a high figure for the first category,Spain has the lowest figure for education/leisure, and Sweden has the lowestfigures for the first AND second categories.
I don't need a conclusion because I have already mentioned a general trendin point 2.
满分范文:
The table shows percentages of consumer expenditure for three categories ofproducts and services in five countries in 2002. It is clear that the largest proportion of consumer spending in eachcountry went on food, drinks and tobacco. On the other hand, theleisure/education category has the lowest percentages in the table. Out of the five countries, consumer spending on food, drinks and tobaccowas noticeably higher in Turkey, at 32.14%, and Ireland, at nearly 29%. Theproportion of spending on leisure and education was also highest in Turkey, at4.35%, while expenditure on clothing and footwear was significantly higher inItaly, at 9%, than in any of the other countries. It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentages of national consumerexpenditure for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, at nearly 16% andjust over 5% respectively.Spain had slightly higher figures for thesecategories, but the lowest figure for leisure/education, at only 1.98%.
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